the forgotten sunset
a burnt umbra crayon
I never used
a half-broken promise
reflected in a fractured mirror
whirlwind shards of truth
buried in a frozen deception
those selfish lies
silent accusations stir
an icy drizzle of resentment
when the rain comes, gently
our temperatures falling
lost innocence
simmers over a low flame
it’s never over when it ends
11 comments:
This is lovely. Especially the last line! *sigh*
what is this about?
Speaking generally, it's about conflict and relationships. The last line is the most important.
Its a lovely poem. Says everything about how im feeling. Wish i had wrote it.
When's your next poem coming AC?
December is when I write most of my poetry for some reason, so expect something around Christmas. I'm still writing stories and stuff.
You know the usual places.
I might post part of the novel I'm working on here soon.
Can you send me the link to your site again pls, the one you asked me to look at before i went on my holidays.
I havent had a lot of time to myself these days but have been meaning to return to it.
I will look forward to your December poem and your OOOOO so hot stories ;)
Night x
Thanks...Im so lazy to go to WC
Hey, hey hey
Tag you're it and other childhood expressions.
David
Merry Christmas AC.
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