As I come ever closer to moving back to America, I've been struggling for inspiration. The past few days, I've spent some time on The White Room, trashing two scenes completely and adding another from Rebecca's POV that paraphrases (a little bit) the missing action. I'm still wondering if I should miss it altogether. There are a couple exchanges in the missing scene that I need, and I'm not sure how to bring it back in the new context.
I would really rather write something new, but I've got two novels that need rewrites and loads of unfinished work. I'd also like to write and send out some new short stories, but that will have to wait.
XVIII. Carnival
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Pepe seemed tireless between Lena’s legs. Indeed, the Aba that her body
painted him whenever she touched him made him seem more and more human, and
if his ...
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